Feedback from tutors and some edits to colour scheme and overall vibe
I emailed my tutor as I felt something was off with my character but I couldn't quite put my finger on it, and he told me that the saturation on the character was a little too high if I wanted to go for the God of War grungy vibe, and as soon as he said it I saw it instantly.
So I went back to my Cyclops and edited the overall saturation of the character, toning things like his skin and claw down, and his shoulder piece all the way down from the bright pink that it was before.
I also took away the ropes on his arm and leg which were previously a separate subobject on my low poly character, but decided that they looked better just baked straight onto the body of the character, I lost a little in silhouette with the ropes, but gained a lot in detail and believability that they are now scraps of cloth wrapped around his arm and legs.
Here's what I have now:
I feel like it looks like night and day in comparison to what it was before, here is a side by side just to show.