Tutor feedback - good news and bad news all round.
I think we've all experienced times where we've entered a situation expecting one thing and getting something completely different in reality. Well that was today. I got some tutor feedback on my Overwatch character and my progress with my Seaclops so far and it was interesting to say the least.
Overall I think they didn't mind my overwatch character but when it came to my Cyclops character, oh boy. There are many things wrong with it and apparently they pretty much all stem from my concept image and that is what has led me astray.
Concept image:
Latest screenshot of Cyclops:
As you can see above, one of many things that my tutors pointed out as wrong was the wrinkle-like shape around the character's stomach. I'd adapted it as a design choice but my tutor pointed it out that he believes it may actually be meant to be the ribcage (somehow). Moreover, they told me in the nicest way possible that my anatomy was completely off and that I was jumping into tertiary details before even mastering the shape of the character yet.
Lastly, they concluded my feedback session saying that it would be best if I completely revamped the character from the ground up by starting with a much stronger and anatomically correct base, so here goes try number 2!